Thursday, March 4, 2010

Start of Writing

Today was the day that I have been preparing for with research and finding sources. I established a solid thesis at the beginning of class and used that to write my hook and rest of the intro paragraph. I think im going to make a quick simple survey just to get other opinions on what students think are distracting in shcools. I think Im going to work on that tomorrow and then start writing my body paragraphs.

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  1. Why don't you post your intro on here to share with others and see if it grabs their attention?

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